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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata11/16/04

is it

polite to say "Yum"?
This one speaks volumes of intent.
: )

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by My Erotic Tail11/17/04

tastey~

oh my...hehehe...hungry now for that taste!
I meant kiss

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by flyguy6911/17/04

Illustrated poetry

This one needs your current av as illustration!

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by Maria239411/17/04

I like

brief poetry, I just cant write it!

minsue, I think this poem would be even better with one of your awesome illustrations, you have me spoiled on them :)

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Fingers dipped in dew
moisten lips -I thought you could expand a little here.
that await your kiss

I do love these short poems. But I wanted to know more about those lips.
Taste, feel, touch.

No harm meant. It was really kind of cute.

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by tungtied2u11/18/04

I agree

with the av comment...This one screams for it. But still wonderful even by itself

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by china-doll11/18/04

Now I want a taste too...

Says more with a few words than I can say with a whole paragraph.

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by impressive12/09/04

Dew I Do ...

... really like this one! Brings to mind some very, very enticing images. ~Imp

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by Anonymous02/28/05

NICE!

Erotic images are formed by just these few words...nicely done ~

~Honey

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