All Comments on 'gloss'

by minsue

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
is it

polite to say "Yum"?

This one speaks volumes of intent.

: )

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
tastey~

oh my...hehehe...hungry now for that taste!

I meant kiss

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Illustrated poetry

This one needs your current av as illustration!

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
I like

brief poetry, I just cant write it!

minsue, I think this poem would be even better with one of your awesome illustrations, you have me spoiled on them :)

Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
~

Fingers dipped in dew

moisten lips -I thought you could expand a little here.

that await your kiss

I do love these short poems. But I wanted to know more about those lips.

Taste, feel, touch.

No harm meant. It was really kind of cute.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
I agree

with the av comment...This one screams for it. But still wonderful even by itself

china-dollchina-dollover 19 years ago
Now I want a taste too...

Says more with a few words than I can say with a whole paragraph.

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Dew I Do ...

... really like this one! Brings to mind some very, very enticing images. ~Imp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
NICE!

Erotic images are formed by just these few words...nicely done ~

~Honey

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