by minsue
brief poetry, I just cant write it!
minsue, I think this poem would be even better with one of your awesome illustrations, you have me spoiled on them :)
Fingers dipped in dew
moisten lips -I thought you could expand a little here.
that await your kiss
I do love these short poems. But I wanted to know more about those lips.
Taste, feel, touch.
No harm meant. It was really kind of cute.
with the av comment...This one screams for it. But still wonderful even by itself
Says more with a few words than I can say with a whole paragraph.
... really like this one! Brings to mind some very, very enticing images. ~Imp
Erotic images are formed by just these few words...nicely done ~
~Honey