All Comments on 'Sunshine and Storms'

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CaseyMannCaseyMannover 6 years ago
More!

PLEASE continue this storyline. I'm divorced, have a step daughter with a friend, both I desperately want in my lonely bed. I guess I'm living vicariously thru your stories. So, PLEASE.

MackieMesserMackieMesserover 6 years ago
More..

yes, please continue on this story. well written

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
fabulous

A very erotic tale, I too would like to read more of this couple. Do they stay together and make babies?

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
EXCELLENT STORY

Is Paul just FWB or are they more?

Kimberly and her Dad seem like more.

Their love seem like more. They have love and tender affection.

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Seriously?

"On the floor next to her was a glass of juice and her bikini top."

"...the next thing I realised was Kimberly was laying on her back ... TOPLESS!"

Amazing powers of observation to discern the contents of the glass was fruit juice but poor analytical skills to not figure out the significance of the garment next to it.

Apparently she habitually wears two bikini tops but this time skipped the second layer, thus the shock of realization.

almalalmalover 6 years ago
My Fantasy

This is my fantasy- cant wait to read more, daddy :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Am I the only one wondering...

Why the step daughter didn't move out when her mother left him?

JerryDancerJerryDancer3 months ago

I would have liked to have seen more of Denise

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