All Comments on 'Catholic School Girl Sex Ed - Day 01'

I think the idea of the story is fun, but your spelling is awful. For example:

"Braking" should be "Breaking"

"Grown" should be "Groan"

Find an editor or spell check and continue story line! Waiting not so patiently, lol.

That was different ....

Interested to see where it goes from here.

wonder should be wander.

You write like hillbilly trash, not a good writer. Get real and get it correct.

I was laughing so hard I couldn't finish the story.

Don't worry about the negativity. Just keep on writing. We need to know how Laura cums in front of the class!!!

Always an interesting topic. It read more like an outline. Suggest taking each "lesson" and embellishing with more interaction with your characters.. Look forward to an interesting "semester"

Great concept. Just need to find an editor to help with grammar. Great start!

I look forward to reading more

Love the story line. I went to catholic school and these type of stories bring back wonderful memories. Don't forget to bring up the wonderful uniforms girls wore.

Memories,

WW

You Catholic tease! You got me all hard and leaking precum and then BAM. Maybe later? Please please tell me more!

It moves a little fast, but the concept is VERY arousing. I like it. Please write Part 2. Those girls will not forget those lessons. Don’t worry about the anonymous commenter that refers to “cuck shit”. He is pretty much on every story’s comments with the same message. Not sure what could possibly be “cuckold” about your story so far. LOL.

U can't just stop. U have to tell me more and soon.

I'm Getting Hard As My Cock Is Growing

I Can't Wait Until I'm Going Into A Tight

Virgin White Pussy

...has got to be put on. If it isn't, that's ok too. It's fucking hilarious! Entertaining story, though. Keep going!

The story is good

This is good. I was thinking before I had read more than 2 lines if the girls were going to learn how to use a boy, peg him and more. You need to follow up.

Laurabentover

Please add more to your story I have really enjoyed it so far . I am a man and it’s good . I want to know if Tom cums and which girl makes him and so much more .