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Great title....
great first line, great poem. See, L&F, you can be inspired by losing a bet. For those who are interested...L&F and i had a bet on the World Series...the loser had to write a tribute poem to the other. L&F, thank you...you did a beautiful job. I'm (almost) speechless and you know that rarely happens.
Bet more often!
This is wonderful! I think irishcatsmeow owes you a tribute poem just for this!
although
I really loved this part-
Five foot four of sunset,
soft, smooth, red and pale.
Speaks words of light
and hard fought wisdom
to those who listen well.
it felt as though part of the story was missing, is there more on the way?
this is a nice poem
Enjoyable and smooth read, with some interesting phrases and details. It didn't rock my world but gave it a good pebbling, which will get it mentioned on the new poems review thread.
sing it!
"Five foot four of sunset"
what about the other six inches?
oop, you mean it isn't about ME?
ha ha
this is a lovely poem, sweet song
We all won
with this bet...nice word usage and imagery...thanks L&F
simply
put, well.
"Red hair, red birds, red socks
have all conspired together.
As such, these words shall flow.
Five foot four of sunset,
soft, smooth, red and pale."
I do like
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The vision of this red hair beauty ~ breathtaking; yet still I wonder at her fiery temper.
IN CELTIC LORE
from where is the tigress' lair, TK U MLJ LV NV
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