All Comments on 'The Small Package'

Christ you peoples slang is worse than the Brits. Totally ruined the story for me.

Tender, thoughtful and well paced. I wonder who will be changing their school in the future?

are called 'clothes' not 'cloths'!!

And despite the a*sehole comments of the other two "Anonymous" idiots, the poorest attempt at English comes from some of those ex-colonials down south of Canada!

I liked it, mainly since I was familiar with the setting, living within 50 miles of the Eaton Centre. Hopefully, there will be another chapter.

A tender, romantic, love story.

Thanks

Spoiled by the crap of the condom he should have just pushed is cock in and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

All cousins should experience such uninhibited love.

Please continue this story. Surely Liz is viting through New Years day?

This was a really lovely story, for me, spoilt by the failure of the cousins to be together on a permanent basis. They are obviously in love with each other.

Hopefully if a follow up appears they will find that they can't live without each other and find a way to be together.

I really enjoyed this sweet story of love blossoming between previously antagonistic cousins. And unlike an earlier commenter, I thought the condom was a crucial plot point. It was a declaration of intent from Liz, a gift of the most personal kind from a virgin to a virgin. It tied perfectly to the story's title (and overcame my fear that it was Literotica's first ever story about an undersized penis!) :)

The added Sweetness is a bonus!!

Zach is an asshole.

I know it's nearly 4 years since this was published, but a second chapter would be very welcome.........

Rapier

Great story but it really needs a followup or two.

What a cute story. Thank you for writing it

To paraphrase Mel Brooks... It's got a beginning, it's got a middle, it's got an end ! And... The two important characters are happy at the end of the story. A 4 Star rating.