All Comments on 'The Swallow'

please more I loved it, more depth or longer story chapters please :) very little actual sex and this story was calling for it. like the new universe idea with cum currency etc.

Crazy concept! I’d like to see it drawn out more, as it moves so quickly.

Love your creativity!

I felt like you pulled the trigger too soon. You could've made the story a bt more complex and at this point we all know where it's headed. Fiddling around with it or maybe introducing a new character or the origins of the impact might help though. Also, maybe add a little depth to her(main char).

Another story that did just the "right thing".... I think I've become addicted and you too are generous Laura .... best regards Chase

You've stumbled onto something here... there's a whole world to explore within this concept and what you've written here would sit nicely on the dust jacket of a very thick and long erotic novel.

I’m a guy and I found the story offensive. That was just WRONG. The next chapter have the addiction morph into the women biting the dicks off. Now that’s sci-fi .