All Comments on 'When in Rome...'

Well, kinda interesting. Good premise story. I lived in Europe for 13 yrs so I sorta understand the mindset. Coed saunas etc. More character development Maybe? I'd be interested in reading more of these girls journey thru France.

I hope you have more chapters

Looking forward to her next exploit

I enjoyed your story very much. I hope it does not degenerate into kinky sex. Draw out the tease for a while. It's fun experiencing new things through the story of these young ladies. Good job!

Thanks to all who read, and especially to those commented. I'm not sure if I'll move on with these characters - I wrote this just an an exercise, "can I write a exhibitionism story that isn't just 'i saw her naked in the (backyard, gym, woods) and then we had sex.' " I might play with Kate showing off in public some more if something interesting comes to me; like Poorwriter says, I wouldn't want it to just become kinky sex scene after scene.