All Comments on 'CvsN 01: Convenience Vs. Need'

Great story. More....

This is a good background story to what you are gonna do next. Can't wait for the next installment.

Also hope both of them ar ok on a side note.

A wonderfull story, I want to read more about the 3!

thx :)

I'm eager to read more of the story of this threesome. You've set the stage quite nicely. Now, please continue. Debbie shouldn't be too subservient, though. It should be a sharing of eguals.

This story seems to be an endless erotic chase as a younger man and an older female gradually come together. What they do is intensely erotic and Hot. Good Read!

Tx:

I'm glad I found your stories. They are well written, well put together. I would hope to see you do more with these three.

Thanks.

Rad'l

Superb writing. The prose is tight, compact and easy to read. The author's style is engaging and he makes excellent use of dialog to show us the characters. It's fine craftsmanship.

The characters are wonderfully and lovingly draw. Karen has see the elephant and knows that working relationships are more important than socially acceptable mores. She's practical and pragmatic yet in her own way, she has a moral code that she lives by. She'll trade sex for an affordable place to live but it has to be with someone she trusts. She's an interesting character, smart and sexy but not fantastic. She's credible and I like her.

Debbie is more enigmatic. She draws men like honey but doesn't relate them as an equal. She needs stability in her life and, while sex is enjoyable, she craves normalcy. Through Karen, we see Debbie as conflicted but she's likeable in her own way, anxious to please and comfortable in her imagined role yet desperately uncomfortable when she feels she needs to be the vixen. It's superb authorship here as making a character like Debbie come alive is difficult.

The main character is a bit roguish but the facade doesn't hide who he truly is. He's a romantic at heart, desirious of home and hearth and loving of both women, though for different reasons. He realizes Debbie is flawed but believes she can grow to become a stronger person, more confident of herself and her sexuality. He and Karen are fuck-buddies but it's more than that -- they care about each other and they're willing to do what they have to for the other's happiness. The three-way relationship is definitely complex and it would please me to see this explored.

As the story is the foundation piece, it is incomplete, lacking a focused plot and clear resolution. That's fine, it merely heightens the anticipation. Narrative drive in the tale is excellent because the author's prose is so good. You feel the rush to speed through the story to get to the end.

Excellent fiction this is. This 100's for you, Tx Tall Tales, for a story well-told.

I like what you have done. This could stand alone, but I would enjoy you extending it into a series. I am very much enjoying your stories.

I don't know how many women comment on the board, but I actually enjoy your stories so much, I have been a bit inspired in my personal life. The story sounds like a wonderful beginning... (hint, hint)

Great beginning, hope you continue it as a continuing multi- escapade type story it seems to get one more involved in the story. I enjoy the threesome interaction.

tell us more about these women

Regarding your question of series vs stand alone stories, I like the series if they go thru to completion. The Blackmail series is an example. Nice to see the ending!

Thanks.

The main male character starts off as an asshole but starts to redeem himself as a likeable dude as the story evolves.

Great story. Had to keep reading till early hours. Erotic beyond belief. Keep the stories coming.

This is one of the best on LE.

You write well. We are completely aroused at first....and then we build toward--

anything can happen!

thank you!

You are one of the very best writers, here in Literotica !! So, trouthfull - so sweet - so tender !!!! Keep writting !!!

PLEASE !!!!

grcaramela

Elena 27f Greece

I remember starting this series mabey 2 years ago and not finishing it. It keep me hard then and I'm still hard now reading it from the beginning again. I'm glad its a long series, now I can keep cumming to the same characters for a while.

Love your stories.

I can tell this is going to be a good story. On to the next chapter............

Please continue your writings and finish this chapter soon.

Great composition and feelings WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I like when you write a series because the reader gets to know the characters really well. Keep up the great work.

Scale

I would rather read a series than a stand alone story any day of the week. You get to know the characters and it just makes for better reading.

Thanks keep up the good work

A lot of interesting situations can be obtained with the mix you have now. Thank you for writing.

So well done if 10 stars were available I would give it a 9.999, nothing is perfect. If it is a series I will follow it closely. If it's not, I will wonder why such a perfect set up was wasted.

Syn

I have been a fan of (the author) Tx Tall Tales for awhile, ever since reading 'Charity Begins Next Door'. I found this series by accident (#23), and just read #1. Absolutely WONDERFUL! Thank You for yet another splendid piece of writing with a great story, magnificent characters, and HOT interactions! Another 5*!

More please.i fav our the ongoing multi chapter stories.Keep writing your great.

Multiescapade stories are my favorite. Allows more character and relationship developments. Looks great so far!

I loved the way it progressed. please don't let it end here

Looks like you are off to a real good start. Have not read any of your stories as of yet, this is the first, and so far it is gentle and loving. Keep it up.

I really like your stuff. Your "Charity" story brought tears to my eyes.

Another lovely story. Charity had me crying and angry with all the emotion you set forth in that story. Please keep this one going.

enjoyed the story though it seemed cut off with the ending just as the real action was beginning. I prefer the on going multi escapades with a lot of girl-girl and groups..

The pore mans porsha is the 914

It would be unwise to incur the wrath of the reader gods. Or at least a great disappointment. More.

Gives the writer more words to give more detail to everything. Debbie reminds me of Amy Adams character Ha, Debbie Strong in Catch me if you Can; when she jumps up in his lap in bed like a frightened little lamb

I realize you are not writing but here are my thoughts anyway

I like to have longer stories, or more precisely, several seven to twelve thousand word stories. I have read stories in the 135,000-word range and they became a slog to read. Another Auther boasted his story was over one million words. Authors need to be aware of the attention spans of a reader.

You have mentioned several in passing remarks. The past lives remark has incest storylines written all over it. I prefer cousin/cousin incest at you can have a greater scope of characters, and Mom/Son and Brother/Sister can get to be boring and predictable.

The sex slave can be used by giving us a glimpse of what she was like and how the use of sexual escapades healed her to become a successful online businesswoman for example.

This is written so well, great characters well described and detailed great sex.

Fantastic.

I'd love to see you develop the relationship with Debbie and Karen as they all settle into the new house. Debbie is still very scared. Naturally these three should all play together then move into some sort of slave relationship, but only when Debbie has lost her fear and become confident in her sexuality.

I would enjoy seeing Debbie serving others at an annual party.

Hi Tx Tall Tales,

I would like to carry on with the continuing story of the three, however it would also be very interesting to bring in other developments as you progress with the story. I really like what you have done so far.

long stories are the best, I don't like short stories and serials at all. provided that the quality is at a decent level.

Please write more chapters

This is a very good start to a good story. Carry on with this theme and tell us more about living with these two women.

Brilliant story set up please continue to add to the very erotic relationship you are building for the people involved.

It is so fabulous to be able to read an honest to goodness author writing strong men and submissive women without needing to humiliate or denigrate them. I wish that I had found you years ago!

I like the multi episodes.

This is a great start for continuing episodes!

Such a kind and lovely story. 5*

Fantastic story, can’t wait to read more!

Great story so far !!

Keep up the great work!

!eB

Love it...

Please keep this story going

Excellent! Another 5 star story and a next part.

Throwaway characters are soon forgotten, but these deserve another few chapters.

Bill S.

Who am I to tell you how or what to write. I'm just a closet erotica writer. I love all of your work that I have read so far. Lead on McDuff.

Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful relationship. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Excellent story, can’t wait for the next episode.