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I like
a poet with the right priorities.
Great job.
Congrats on the "E"
:)
enjoyed your POV, can I borrow that boom box when youre done? all the good spirits have vacated mine ...congrats on the E
wow, I love reading something different!
This was fun. Hey, you got an E! :) And you're also mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry board.
Clever
I enjoyed this foray into a new form. Well done, and an "E" to boot!
I was puzzled by the grammar a little: you seem to set up a scale in each stanza with the dollar value as a fulcrum, but you are not consistent. Is this intentional?
request
hmmmm still pondering humanist enlightenment... I want a poem on that :)
congrats!
very original
I'm really enjoying the different approaches you're taking. Keep surprising me...I love unusual and inventive, and that you are.
Your best catalog poem yet
This is your best catalog yet - I marveled on it.
I am reminded of the extensive use of catalogs in classics such as “Moby-Dick” and less known as “Gargantua and Pantagruel” (the latter hilarious). But the closest association was the credit card commercial (still running) which lists merchandise or services plus a priceless exception - great idea.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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