It's My Party & I'll Cry If I Want To

to annom not to marry a white woman

Well Mr/ms myoptic it doesn't stop at white women
Cheating transcends all race and nationally. And GENDER. SO GO TO THE OPTOMETRIST AND GET THE TRIFOCAL TO SEE WHAT T THE WORLD IS REALLY LIKE

lol @ Master falcon

white girls are sluts, black girls are thots--- basically your right any female is likely to cheat but i feel like white girls and black girls tend to cheat more than other female races.. just off my experience

Remarriage Just Too Soon!

Jay learns of adultery around midnight, plus or minus a few hours. Jay does't sleep all night, talks to Lori about twelve hours (more or less) after learning of adultery (& Lori's seen no evidence, only Jay's word for it) and they both decide to divove and remarry in that short time? Jay's decision too divorce is plausible. Far too implausible are both their decisions to divorce and remarry the other party on the rebound.

Good narrative, decent plot, decent development of three characters, (Lori's essentially a place filler--so no development is okay); but the remarriage drops this from 5 stars to 3.

Wow, what powerful story!.....it is a reflection of life

That is a great story with tremendous lesson learning! It is so enjoyable reading all the way through it. It is well written, great context with full passion.
As a married women I can tell this story touched me deeper. Although I can't see myself doing that not even in my own bed. I love my husband so much and I sure know how great things he does for me.....and I really appreciate that!.
I just loved this story....congrats to the author!

good flash story

I don't understand why he married Lori.

It started out pretty good.

Then I read the stupidest thing and laughed so hard I think I broke a rib.

The very next day, Jay and the fuckwad's wife talk and decide they will divorce their spouses and get married.

What the fuck!

Pretty Good Story

Short, sweet, and right to the point. I agree with other comments that the ending was a little abrupt, but I'm not sure what was left to be said.

Good

But too short.