All Comments on 'A Present for Daddy'

HOPE TO READ MORE OF IT

I only wish I could receive such a present! So hot :)

Amazing!!keep it up.What's Next?

Such a clever little punch line!

Lukas

A story that makes my heart glow. Wonderfully told and well written. Erotic in a subtle manner.

It is a narrative, with and honest finish, of an event that is experienced more often than many people can admit. I would appreciate another chapter or two.

Gran Pa

Very well written. Nice job indeed.

Short, nicely told,with a neat little twist at the end. It should do well in the contest. Good luck.

Rumple

A wonderfully told story. Sexy and subtle.. erotic as hell. I can't wait to read more.

Just like Angela, I got suckered also. Daddy calling her "Mia" was the real, planned seduction.

On the other hand, you drew me into the story so strongly that I don't like one of the characters. That requires talent.

Wish my daddy would have taken me like this!

lol great twist.

would love my daddies cock in me just like that

I loved the story. And would love to here from girls that would like to try it for real samhop42@gmail.com

The ending was unexpected and yet so great! Write more like this!!!

You spin a great tale. I look forward to reading more. I'd like to see what Angela's reaction is to her father's last words. But again, GREAT WORK!

That was a great story, but I too would love to have know what Angela's reaction would have been to her father at the end. I guess you left it open for all of us to make up our own conclusion, but it would be interesting to know what you had in mind.

Anyway it was still fantastic!

More please