by Snowydog
Very nice story! Well written and with the woman more in mind rather than the man. This is a refreshing difference. I choose to 'Kiss him passionately". I can't wait for the continuation. Thank you for sharing.
dead end
and "TBC" is always inappropriate. we can find the end of a page ourselves, don't write like a third grader.
As a High School Literature Professor, I see a very classic writing style here. I was surprised by the ending similar to the vintage 'choose-your-own-adventure' short novels. It brings a new aspect of reader interaction to the story which is unique. Excellent piece of art. Have you already submitted both choice directions? Just curious.