All Comments on 'Stress Relief'

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Subby72Subby72over 6 years ago
My Choice...

Very nice story! Well written and with the woman more in mind rather than the man. This is a refreshing difference. I choose to 'Kiss him passionately". I can't wait for the continuation. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
stress relief

dead end

and "TBC" is always inappropriate. we can find the end of a page ourselves, don't write like a third grader.

JustAScholarJustAScholarover 6 years ago
Refreshingly Different

As a High School Literature Professor, I see a very classic writing style here. I was surprised by the ending similar to the vintage 'choose-your-own-adventure' short novels. It brings a new aspect of reader interaction to the story which is unique. Excellent piece of art. Have you already submitted both choice directions? Just curious.

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