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by Anonymous

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by jimmcdonald60912/06/17

Predictable

Your lack imagination and feeling spoils the story line.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Not bad for a first story!

And this is the right category!

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Justgr8 makes a point

And, have to say; noticed in other stories that the characters will refer to it as a fetish.
So, that can only mean that the authors know fully that these stories belong in the Fetish category. Must like low scores and negative comments to continually post the stories in a category where they would receive such ire and not be welcome from the average reader.
Oh well, until they learn they will continue to read low scores; especially when they're not even read...

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by Anonymous12/06/17

They put them here to..........

1 : piss off as much of the audience as possible.

2: they'll still get more eyes than in that backwater hub where they actually belong .

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by kuroneko_dk12/06/17

sloppy seconds...

Sure loser / cucky love too eat pies, 1*

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by sbrooks103x12/06/17

Fetish

They also have a masochist fetish, so they come here for the figurative pain!

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by Impo_6412/06/17

All said about "fetish" by the other comments...

All said about "fetish" by the other comments...But this has also a lot of weak points that turn this into a bad, bad story: 1st - she was just his girlfriend...the angst from cuckolding is much lower than the one in a consolidated marriage, because this was just a live sex scene for him and if some problem shows up, he or she just have to say: bye, bye...2nd - The lover trying to have a cheap fuck, smirked too much (it also seems that "smirk" is the writer's favorite word...3rd - she was a stupid girlfriend accepting doing this while being just a girlfriend...99% sure she won't be his wife...4th - "shooting his fifth and final load (goal)", like in a soccer game! So this could just have a more than deserved 1*

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by Anonymous12/06/17

BROOKS QUESTION

You hate cuck stories and always give bad comments to one but let a B.T.B story come along and you blast any bad comments as you defend the B,T,B story.
Why read stories you know you will not like and make snide comments??
Just curious..

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Well

I had 6 threesomes in college with my best friend and different girls. It was fun but they were not our girlfriends. It was about driving them nuts with Cummings. But when I got married I never could share and he told me the same. But I still see how some could. The thing I don't get is a duck doesn't play they just watch that seem so boring to me.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

She smirked and told him she wasn't done yet, and only asked if he minded sloppy seconds...

He 'Smirked" in return and said, "Not on your life, whore. And thanks for the preview of what our marriage would be like. I've got some packing to do so I can get moved out while you are sleeping, so go take a nap."

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by PolyLvr12/06/17

To the last anony

Reading comprehension isn't high on your list of Skills, is it? He wanted her to do this. He urged her to do it. He thoroughly enjoyed being with her while she did it.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Smirked

Definition: smirk is the conceited smile you might get after you have just defeated an opponent. verb

Annon to Brooks Yes he commits badly at cuck stories, but he does the same when he reads other stories that are poorly written. If you don't like what he says go back and read his works and make bad commits on them. I submitted a story and he gave his opinion on it and I had one of two choices, get pissed off (which would have been easy to do), or learn from it.

I started to read this story and with in the first five paragraphs I couldn't take it. The main thing that jumped out at me was the authors use of the word 'Smirked'. I scanned the story and 10 times someone smirked. I didn't take the time to add in the grins and smiles.

If all of you readers that like cuck stories just so you can hear how little your cock is and how much better your wife or girlfriend loves her lover you deserve to still be in your parents basement. Not every story needs to be a BTB story but not a cuck story either.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

I guess this is one way to get some attention.

It must really suck.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Talky talk

Try some dialogue next time

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by julie_van0112/06/17

Great first effort.

Thanks for sharing it with everyone. Looking forward to
more of your work.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Did anybody really expect a masterpiece of erotica

from someone that calls himself "CuckLover88". No surprise there.
As always, the comments are entertaining. At least that's something.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Not a bad first effort.

But you overused the word "smirk". And while I could pump out 5 loads when I was 19, I doubt anyone in their 20'scould confidently claim to fuck 5 times to orgasm back to back.

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by sbrooks103x12/06/17

@Anonymous Re: "BROOKS QUESTION"

I didn't read the story, I was just responding to the comments.

The only bad comments I blast on BTB stories are the ones calling them "sick fetish BTB." I have no problem with criticizing BTB stories, I have done so often myself!

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Crap, nonsnse, stupid, wimp and pathetic story. 1* for this garbage

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context and pure lame.
What waste of time reading this trash. There was nothing sexy, erotic or entertaining about this stupid garbage.
The writer is more interested in describing big cocks and lots of cum rather than his STD cunt wife.....so perhaps the writer enjoys cocks and pretend his is a wimp pathetic husband.
1* for such nonsense and bad written story.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

"I didn't originally intend to publish it."

You should have gone with your first instinct.

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???

Read the description for Loving Wives. What part of Married Extra Marital fun do you not understand.? Also look up the definition of cuckold. You couldn't have picked a worst category to post this one.

No score for LW, but if it were in another--almost any other--I'd give it a fair score.

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by KidG100012/06/17

this was great

i really enjoyed this story, it was a great first story. please keep on writing!

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by Anonymous12/06/17

"I didn't originally intend to publish it."....well next time listen to your instincts!...1*

This story really sucks!....it's so poor written, nothing new or exciting here.
This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time.
1* for this nonsense tale.

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by 26thNC12/07/17

2

What is the allure of seeing your wife or girlfriend with another man? Are you so unsure in your own manhood that you need to be humiliated on top of it. Screw this carp.

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by bayernpeter112/07/17

What has a GF to do at *LW"???

Go to the pervert section "cuckold/wimp" where all the idiots post!!

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by sbrooks103x12/07/17

@bayernpeter1

While I share your aversion to cuck, it has been long established that girlfriends and fiancees are acceptable topics here.

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by oldbearswitch12/08/17

Dude, nice try, however

If the woman is not loving and respectful, your score will drop

If she's a biotch like this, it will bomb. 1 🌟.

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by dragonmann7212/08/17

How did she get home.

When last I read this, he followed her to the motel, watched her half the night and went home. How did she get home. When she started dating did she inform him with whom and where she was going? Did he remind her about their deal? CuckLover88 you should have addressed these questions if you were going to end your story the way you did.

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by AnnetteBishop12/08/17

Where do I find a guy who can shoot 5 full loads? Sign me up

I want some of that cock, nice story. Hot and wet, love cum xoxoxo Annette

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by mudhentwo12/09/17

Lucky guy!

I envy yu!

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by avengerfive12/28/17

Hot!

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