All Comments on 'Dorothy Does Oz Ch. 02'

by Maguppy Puppy

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Sean RenaudSean Renaudover 19 years ago
excellent

Great work, keep it up man. The cum coated lolly pop was an inspired moment.

HansomeHansomeover 19 years ago
smiles

you brought a smile to My face and My dirty mind

I plan on reading the rest of the series so write quickly

have to say I can't wait to see how you deal with the rest of the "Land of OZ" thank you for writing this story

garry1952garry1952over 19 years ago
"I Want to Cum Home"

You have the potential of a great series. I, too, can't wait to see where and who your Dorothy does next. Hurry and write the third installment.

Lich LordLich Lordover 19 years ago
Another great submission

This is building up to being one hell of a story.

Forsaken OneForsaken Oneover 19 years ago
Yeah!

That was awesome! this starting to turn into a classic.

Doesn't the mayor get a turn? Oh well, I suppose she couldn't fuck the entire village. Still a great series though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

I don't know how I missed this before. You've changed my entire outlook on the Wizard of Oz.

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