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jimmcdonald609jimmcdonald609over 6 years ago
Good start

You spent a great deal of time on character development.

I trust there will be a continuation of this storyline.

SexySandra01SexySandra01over 6 years ago
Lovely

Sure hope there's more to this

300bowler300300bowler300over 6 years ago
JUST SAY YES!!!!!

THAT ARE MORE AND MORE CHAPTERS COMING OF THIS WONDERFUL WELL WRITTEN START...! BETTY jo xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

oh please can there be more to this wonderful story. what a great opening start. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More, please!

I also would like to see more of the story. Keep on writing!

HGamer316HGamer316over 6 years ago

Great Story, hopefully its just a setup for whats to come in the future.

willowindwillowindover 6 years ago
What comes next?

Great start. I hope this is going to become a long story. Characters are all set and things are just hotting up. Like all the other comments, i want to see more.

MothOnelMothOnelover 6 years ago
Definitely Continue Writing

I'd like to see more of this story. I'd also like to see whatever else your mind has to offer. Topnotch writing. It's easy to be a part of the story because of the way you write. I love it. Thanks

ConfusedGiantConfusedGiantover 6 years ago
Awesome

Incredible story, please write more of it. Would love an opportunity like Briana is given

goodlorigoodloriover 6 years ago
I Love This

Please keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wasn't keen

I found the story interesting, but kept finding numerous spelling mistakes, poor grammar, and incorrect words throughout. Though the story was not flooded with errors, there were just enough to keep me from being immersed.

scarecrow00scarecrow00over 6 years ago
Amazing! Need more!

This is really cool and is coming from a very familiar viewpoint of mine! I really love this and would love to see a continuation of Brianna's adventures and work, preferably punishments lol but pleeeease keep these coming!

pdw1234pdwpdw1234pdwover 6 years ago

What would i like to know the rest of Brianna's new life. living in such a house with such special guests will certainly lead to new adventures.

SRand0mSRand0mover 6 years ago
Familiar

This story seems to be extremely familiar, so far. Almost like I have read or possibly experienced this in my past somehow, someway. I will look forward to reading continuations on this story when they become available and see if I still have the feeling of deja vu at that time. Either way, even with the spelling and grammar mistakes, it still makes for an interesting story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sissy heaven

Such a lovely story, wish it were me, please can we have some more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice story

I was out of work and I was looking for work when I found a help want sign on the a door dish washer want at g and l bar so I walk over there I went in and this older man ask what I want I told I want the job as dish washer well I was look for a younger man I told I not that old he got up and look at me well maybe I give you a try but you know that this is a lesbian and gay place I told him so would I have to wear some thing that show my ass off he look at me you are one smart bitch I told him right I am now do I get the job or not he said yes smart ass he show me thee back were I was to work it was a small place to work in I start to wash the pot when he came behind to get out I was bend a bit so my ass was out when he went bye he rub my ass as a joke I said I glad I not in a short skirt he left this went on for a week every night he would come pass and I felt his hand on me I told him last night I wear a skirt to work and I laugh well when I came to work to night in my locker hanging up was a dress and a note smart ass pull your knew outfit on a girl walk in and saw me with the dress she said I see he got you in a short skirt I said yes miss put it on I want to see what you look like I did as told once dress well you look nice here let me fix it so you look a bit girly she pull my shirt off and put a bra that had fake breast in the bra cups then a blouse as a joke I said what no panties she laugh you will not need them you will soon beg for them well after I was dress and went out to work the boss came bye I look at him and said well you like the way I am he said yes well smart ass you not that smart now no but I do like the cook just maybe I let him have me later the boss got mad he walk up behind me he slap my ass till it was red I start to cry please boss I was just joking I know you want me please boss just then the cook came in the boss told him take your apron off when he did I saw tits now come here its time we show this smart ass bitch who the bosses around here well after that night I beg them to make me there bitch even the lady came back and said well dears is he a she now after that I live as a girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved this story

Great story, hopefully there will be more chapters to it

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Looking forward to more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Well written, one of my all time favorite fantasy environments for what hopefully become a great series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I look forward to more.

This is one of the best written stories I've read recently. I'll admit to having just this sort of fantasy. I sincerely hope that you write more chapters and turn this into a series, as it's short length is it's only major detractor in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More!!!

Her fist time being taken as a sissy slut gurl..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Writing and Great Story

You are an unusually good writer and the story you told was engrossing from the very start. I will be looking forward eagerly to the next chapter. Thank you for your work!

Emmakate88Emmakate88almost 6 years ago
Please mam, I'd like some more... Lol

But seriously I hope you choose to continue this story. It's well written. And I'm intrigued to see the character development you have planned.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow

This story is absolutely brilliant and is crying out for at least a few more chapters, please bring out the next episode soon,I am loving it, keep up the good work gurl.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Both!

Maidgirl can be both: Brian AND Brianna!

On your back. Missionary position. Legs raised up high and parted wife.

Chrissie and strap-on fucking you with reckless abandon.

Head dangling over the edge of the bed: Andrew's cock thrusting mercilessly into your mouth and down your throat.

Good girl, maidgirl, v-e-r-y good girl!

(Five stars)

SwedSissWannabeSwedSissWannabealmost 3 years ago

Fantastic. I can't wait to read the rest of the series 😁

MissLouisecdMissLouisecdover 2 years ago

id love to work there

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If not for the chastity inclusion I would have rated the story 5 stars. As it is I will not rate it rather then give a bad rating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

How do I apply to work in this wonderful bed and breakfast?

woodseaveswoodseavesover 2 years ago

Wow, a lovely beginning to what I'm sure will be a great series.

I love the way you handle the opening and all the scenes with patience and thoughtfulness, taking a lot of care over the details. Very well done!

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter(s?) about Brianna's training and fulfilling her destiny as a woman

Mukul10Mukul10almost 2 years ago

Loved it ...well written ... Plz continue

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful beginning with a lovely cast of characters. Marvelous storyline, interesting and very well written. Looking forward to the next installment. 💋

Veronica

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is more fetish/bdsm than crossdressing. Ugly story

liz33ndliz33nd9 months ago

this is gonna be good.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Didn’t ask what the pay was. Didn’t question getting her own breasts and whether it was going to be implants or estrogen. Too many questions left unanswered and without a thought or concern being given.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I wish I could be a sissy maid for her.

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