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by Anonymous

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by tungtied2u11/24/04

This poem demonstrates

how a few words correctly chosen and placed, can speak powerfully and deeply.Nice read.

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by annaswirls11/24/04

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this gave me chills. well done, Gina.

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by 11/25/04

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Of the ones that you posted today, I like this one the best. I agree with tt2u. This a perfect little piece.

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by WickedEve11/26/04

such a seemingly simple poem

that's just about simply perfect.

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by Anonymous12/14/04

SHORT N' MEANINGFUL

Gina, this is short but full of meaning! Simple n' great!
Ebby
of OM

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by Anonymous02/22/05

i saw

what you said in the thread about the votes. Dont youknow the vote system here is screwed beyond belief? If you were proud of this poem when it has 11 5's, you should be proud of it no matter what. Dont base your self esteem on a vote system that is so seriously flawed if you do you will never amount to anything more than another Lit clickish poet...good luck

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by LeBroz07/12/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.



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