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An Unexpected Intrigue

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by Anonymous11/21/04

wow

i know rape is wrong............but damn this was a HOT story

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by Anonymous11/22/04

It was good, but . . .

The story was good, you know that. But the ending was weak. So weak in fact that it let me down greatly. You did a great job handling the non-consent, the pleasure, the pain, the feelings, but the ending was too abrupt. Maybe have her see him in the apartment, and then there be a part two of how that excursion goes. Just a thought. Too much too fast is not good. It's like having a two minute orgasm. Dissatisfying.

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