Pregnant Pause

Great work!!!

This story is one of the best! Write part 2!!!

ruined

Learn grammar and syntax. Don't give up your day job

Great story!

I really enjoyed this! Certainly left me --well excited--'L'

Please don't pay attention to ruined

I think your story is wonderful and if your critic above would learn to just enjoy a story for what it is worth instead of trashing it as not being a literary masterpiece, he might actually enjoy it!

Nice passion-driven story!

I really enjoyed the naturalness of it. It also was good to see the story taken to its natural "biological" conclusion. You certainly have potential for sequels here.

Could perhaps have been developed further...

I think the story is good and the sexual plot did have me turned on. However, storywise it feels almost like a summary of several chapters. This is unfortunate, since I think you could have used this as a synopsis to write a few, more detailed separate parts. Or at least, that's the way I would have done it. Too each his/her own, I guess. :)

BEAUTIFUL

I HAVE NO WORDS. I LOVED IT.

Terrific

This is your best and one the very best. Please do more.

details

you need to have more details there are not enough yeah okay they fucked and cam but what happened in between

it is funny know watching wife with another man

twenty people said the story was good and one said bad thing about story.wonder why!oh the story didn't have hubby watching wife been fuck by another man or she didn;t go to college english 101.the story was sexy and arousing,that what you want from this site.keep doing what you like young lady and enjoy yourself.

Need more erotic detail

Try to make sure to get a lot of detail in, that makes the reader very horny. Looking forward to more from you.

I'm so fucking hard!

One of the hottest stories i've read on literotica. Please continue it. The continouus fucking, the incest, the internal cum shots, the pregnacy.... Fucking amazining. The only thing it needs is a second chapter and some anal.

Pregged good!

This story was easily a '10,000' out of a possible '100'. Give us more...please. If you cannot write it for Literotica, write it and send it to me at waucondaone@nctv.com.

great story

love this story! a new favorite

Great

Great story, quick to develop, very good desciptive phrases

Pregnant

Bet he's thinking of helping his Uncle out again!

Boozeupbill

Sounds like he had it in for his uncle.

nice

continue the story because siblings will be needed

GREAT STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT

MY FRIEND YOU NEED AN EDITOR, THE STORY IT SELF IS GREAT.JUST WORK ON THE BODY OF THE STORY ADD MORE DETAILS. NO MATTER WHAT OTHERS SAY, DONE STOP WRITING.YOU HAVE TALENT JUST HONE IT. A WOULD BE FAN.....................LAROC OF AGES

Is there going to be more?

Has she got a sister?

I really enjoyed this story as my Fantasy was to impregnate every girl I had sex with. Birth controls stopped that until I married. Great story!!!