you wrote a good story but it should be longer, it was getting interesting
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Anonymous12/02/05
just right
I thought it was just the right length! Great job retelling your story! It certainly doesn't have to be long to be good...sometimes stories are too long and drawn out, but this was just right.
I enjoyed the sneakiness and the realism, as well as the attention to detail (in the retelling) with the jacket over "your" pants...
great job, and keep 'it' up! :)
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Anonymous05/07/07
good
is this really true? man thats hot. Mother and daughter fucking each other.
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Anonymous09/21/07
fantastic!
shit, your pretty lucky give yourself a pat on the back for screwing both the mom and the daughter.
It has taken me a long time to actually have the guts to search for a mother daughter taboo story and I am glad that yours was the first One. It was not enough to scare me but enough for me to ease my way into this desire, fetish of mine.
I loved it... pure and simple. It was hot and I loved how he walked out with the jacket over him.
The images were so vivid I loved it.
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Anonymous08/03/09
Contortionist
Don't know when this was posted.Pay attention to little details,you say your LEFT leg brushed up against her knee, and she pulled your RIGHT hand out of her pussy. Then either you are a contortionist, or at some point during all this you had your back to your wife. I don't think she would still be watching the movie and not notice anything do you ?????. Like I said just a little detail but it takes peoples minds' off of the main story and spoils it (Did Mine)
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make it longer
you wrote a good story but it should be longer, it was getting interesting
just right
I thought it was just the right length! Great job retelling your story! It certainly doesn't have to be long to be good...sometimes stories are too long and drawn out, but this was just right.
I enjoyed the sneakiness and the realism, as well as the attention to detail (in the retelling) with the jacket over "your" pants...
great job, and keep 'it' up! :)
good
is this really true? man thats hot. Mother and daughter fucking each other.
fantastic!
shit, your pretty lucky give yourself a pat on the back for screwing both the mom and the daughter.
Brilliantly mastered
It has taken me a long time to actually have the guts to search for a mother daughter taboo story and I am glad that yours was the first One. It was not enough to scare me but enough for me to ease my way into this desire, fetish of mine.
I loved it... pure and simple. It was hot and I loved how he walked out with the jacket over him.
The images were so vivid I loved it.
Contortionist
Don't know when this was posted.Pay attention to little details,you say your LEFT leg brushed up against her knee, and she pulled your RIGHT hand out of her pussy. Then either you are a contortionist, or at some point during all this you had your back to your wife. I don't think she would still be watching the movie and not notice anything do you ?????. Like I said just a little detail but it takes peoples minds' off of the main story and spoils it (Did Mine)
HOW LUCKY CAN YOU BE
love the fist story so very hot and erotic can wait to read even more.
Very hot...
...but strains credibility somewhat by asking us to believe wife wouldn't have noticed what was going on so close to her.
Hmmm; not so much teasin as pleasin, yummy
Yep; definitely wish I was the neighbor
DKP
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