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Not too shabby
Pretty good story, with very few grammer flaws.
Better, But That's Not Saying Much
Well, at least somebody actually had sex this time.
could use more "oomph"...
This is a little sluggish, needs a bit more enthusiasm. Perhaps not as much as The Witch of Miranda, which is arguably too long, but something is missing here, a creative spark, the sheer thrill of writing.
Always Check The Fine Print . . .
. . . when dealing with a Magical Entity.
I have read several of Piers Anthony's novels but not 'The Bridge.' So, why do I feel that Paul should have tried to find out what Minnie would become now that her original purpose was fulfilled.
I have enjoyed your introduction to the Christmas Fairy. Is there to be a Chapter 02, or will you direct us to Anthony’s original, to work out the answer for ourselves?
What an odd story...
But pardon the pun ... 'enchanting.' Your mind is a wonder Ogg and that is a compliment to be sure. Good luck!
Awesome!!!!!!
There'd better be a chapter two up or I'm coming after ya lol
That was great hon... can't wait to read more. The transition scene was brilliantly done.
Good stuff there Ogg!!! ;-)
Merry Christmas to you and your family xoxoxoxox
Hmmmm...
I may have to take a vacation in your head some day...seems like an interesting place to go.
Please!
I'm fond of fairies and this one is no exception.
The story was good reading and you leave enough anticipation for me to look forward to a next chapter.
There will be one, please?
Good luck.
The Marvelous Minnie
Such a shame her last name wasn't Cooper. Fun read, Og.
Rumple
Sounds like something I've read before
A certain well-known science fiction/fantasy author I believe. It was in one of his "publish anything I want" anthologies... I can't remember too much detail about the story, but this one does seem to be somewhat expanded. If this is based on that one, it seems to be pretty good adaptation.
Unbelievable
Man, it ain't often anymore that I come to any erotic story place and find stuff that inspires me.
I'm glad I put you on my faves list and came back to browse, man, you can write interesting stuff indeed.
Liked the premise
Right on. Not all sentient beings even if humanoid in form would be the same size. All kinds of variables would dictate size, so worlds of two inch or twenty foot beings could exist, much like Gulliver's universe.
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