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This is wonderful and very strong. You express the mourning perfectly. Thank you for giving us your poem.
Good Gracious~~~
Gina, I have to say ..
This poem just reached in an grabbed my heart.I think you did a wonderful job on this poem.I just felt it speed thru me and touch every spot.Almost in tears with the grief I see here.
So touching and lovley. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It truly touches the soul.
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well done
nice escalation to
"Damn it!" also
I also feel the pain you have.
Hello gina,i just had to say i have and still feel the pain you are going through right now.I only wish i could say the words you need to hear,but i have not got them.I do however feel that putting it in writing may help you live through it all.With all of that said ,i believe that this is pain put to true and beautiful words.I am glad that you felt that you could share this pain,wonderful writing.God bless Gina.
Hootie....
GIna. . .
Its painful to read that, which means it is good. I am right there with you in your sentiments and feelings. Regardless, I am glad she didn't take you with her.
very touching
I can totally relate to this poem. I have felt this kind of grief myself. A very touching poem.
Grief
Is something best shared...thank you.
Grief...
is something it is best to share...so thank you.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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