All Comments on 'Randy's Ordeal Ch. 02'

This is very hot. Hope you keep up the chapters.

We can't wait to see more chapters. What a great fantasy this is.

Best story I've read in a while.

This is no place to stop! Keep up the series.

This is lovely! I can't wait for all members of the book club to have a turn. Randy (SUCH a great name!) will have an exhausting night. But after it's all done he realizes to his horror he desperately wants to do it all over again.

Wait. Is the key really not available until Monday?!!

Very nice. I like the way you switch between Randy and Meghan and the contrast between his helplessness and her total freedom to improvise. I hope Meghan will take her time to degrade Randy in stages. I'm eager for another chapter, but I also hope you will also take your time to maintain the tone and quality of these 2 chapters.

I like this story, the forced submission and the wife's friends participating. Wish there was more. Lots of possibilities. Almost 2 years from the last submission. Please come back.

It's just lurching evermore into the totally unbelievable. What wife would ever dream of doing that to her husband, if she wanted her marriage to survive?

The fans are are all going to shout "but it's just a fantasy" yeeesss, but it's a totally stupid storyline that is in no way credible at all.

No trust left after this humiliation! Dump the cunt!

abusive wife. What guy would stay with someone who completely betrays his trust?

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I really wish you were still writing.