All Comments on 'Dorothy Does Oz Ch. 03'

Looking forward to the continuing stories.

You have good writing potential, buy could you make the next installment longer?

Keep up the good work. The installments are just about the right length, maybe a smidge longer but I like the scene by scene break down. Makes it a fun quick read.

Nice chapter!

At the end, I was hoping she would finally get to take on the entire village. But hey, this is great the way it is!

and hot.