All Comments on 'And So It Blows'

What a waste . people get killed for doing this kind of stuff . should have been in non consent

My apologies for tagging it incorrectly. Please understand that I'm writing this as a personal fantasy - no harm intended. Thank you for your feedback.

We have random girls forcing a random guy to drink cum. It would have been a much better read if the guy's character would be explored somewhat so we could actually care about his predicament. Or give the girls some motivation other than them simply being evil perverts. Also this goes directly into an extreme from the start. It could have really used some warm-up activities before it went into chugging jugs of cum.

Fair point! This was actually the first story I wrote with these characters and it certainly shows. That's also why it's quite a bit crueler than the follow-ups - it was intended to be a one-off, but I enjoyed the characters and have continued developing them in subsequent stories. Give them a read and let me know what you think! Thanks for your comment. :-)

Great story and lovely written. Kisses