All Comments on 'Susie's No-Panties Christmas Surprise'

by Sabledrake

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Crystal GoddessCrystal Goddessover 19 years ago
HO HO HO

Boy did that not turn out like I thought it would. That was GOOD! Keep 'em coming!

kendahl6969kendahl6969over 19 years ago
Come all ye unfaithful!!

Great first-person storytelling..really felt like I was riding along with Susie..wonderful descriptions..nice twist ending!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Truly nice!

Just as said, very nice.

sacksackover 19 years ago
nice to have a "lighter" story

With all the stories that have serious endings out there (mine included!) it's nice to have some lighthearted, well-written fare. Good luck!

skip.69skip.69over 19 years ago
Lovely twist

I must confess I did not see the twist coming until it happened. Lovely, full of fun. I bet the author is, too.

CumbabyCumbabyover 19 years ago
Excellent!

Very well written and descriptive, I felt as if I were there on the sleigh with our heroine.

The twist at the end was exquisite!

"Merry Christmas to all,and to all a good night!"

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Well done!

Light, but hot -- with an unexpected twist. Good luck! ~Imp

MooncatXMooncatXover 19 years ago
Warms the Holidays *^_^*

ooo! That helps heat up the holidays *^_^* Love the twist ending. Love it!

Mooncat

>^,,^<

Virtual_BurlesqueVirtual_Burlesqueover 19 years ago
Great story with a sneaky twist!

I have just one comment.

Silver Falls must be quite a kinky town if the Santa Claus Parade features an Elf riding barebottom on an Elk!

carsonshepherdcarsonshepherdover 19 years ago
He Only Comes Once A Year?

Poor Santa! This is great. I wish I lived in Silver Falls!

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
I love a parade.....

and that one was totally hot!! Great twist there, very unexpected and wonderfully written.

SabledrakeSabledrakeover 19 years agoAuthor
Thank you everyone!

I am so pleased that people have been enjoying this story ... it was a lot of fun to write. All the comments and feedback are greatly appreciated.

English LadyEnglish Ladyover 19 years ago
hot, very hot!

The best I've read so far, hot, christmassy and well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT

A perfect combination of kinkiness and real hot sex! Reading this makes me so hot that i have to fish out my viberator.

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
Well done!

What a great twist! I was tense all through the parade, afraid they would be caught. And then the big realization! Fabulous story. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yup

good

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
no panties

that was really great

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
Hohoho

That was really fun reading and hot too. Nice ending and totally unexpected. I was waiting for them to get caught. LOL

Good luck.

JRavenJRavenover 19 years ago
Beware of Costumed Sex

But you know, I can think of a few "Santa's" that I'd like to accidently fuck...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
awesome

Oh my god! With his FATHER!?! Ew! Jeez, no wonder he was protesting so much at first. I remember thinking midway how weird it was for a teenage boy to be AGAINST the concept of having hot, taboo sex with his girlfriend. But jeez, the DAD? And he couldn't say so? What a jerk. Heh.

Awesome story, though. I love the way you wrote it, first person stream-of-thought kinda thing. Very sexy.

msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
Great Story

Sexy with a twist that made it even sexier! Great writing! Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Christmas is Cuming

Great story. Loved the twist at the end. You could write another few chapters on this story very easily. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
who woulda thunk it?

I had a feeling this was going to happen, but it was still a surprise when it actually did happen. excellent. Wonder what old man Brewster's New Year's resolution will be??

floweringbellafloweringbellaalmost 17 years ago
Merry Christmas!

Hot story - nice descriptions, altogether fabulously written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great

That was an great story. The ending was so clever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great

Loved the story! It had a great plot, it was descriptive and it was just overall a hot read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
HOT!!

Absolutely loved this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Surprise Benefactor

Very well done! I was completely surprised at the start of page 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
GREAT STORY & SURPRISED

Surprised at ending & surprised because so many of your other stories not very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Christmas Is Cumming!

Most delightful. I wished you had recent submissions, I hate seeing a good writer to stop writing their wonderful stories. Please come back.

Georgia Peach

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Shocking

Good story but question. Is the guy guilty of rape on any level? Also good imagery but when she describes her first time she said he was trying to put a condom on and undo her bra while she had his dick in her mouth. See the problem? How can the guy even attempt to put a condom on while getting a blowjob? I mean how does that even work? Other than that very neat an well described. Keep it up.

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