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and now a sequel please.....
You wouldn't want to be a grinch and deny everyone the hot sex!!
and now a sequel please.....
You wouldn't want to be a grinch and deny everyone the hot sex!!
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Take this as constructive feedback and get your work edited before you submit it. The changes in tense and the typing errors didn't do you any favors.
U4ea...
I saw your post on the AH and took it into consideration on the tense changes. A hot little tale by the way. Good luck!
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That was a fun read. Too bad about the tense screw-up. It'll probably cost you a few votes but the story is still a good one.
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