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Online Christmas Wishes

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by Anonymous

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by sack11/22/04

and now a sequel please.....

You wouldn't want to be a grinch and deny everyone the hot sex!!

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by sack11/22/04

and now a sequel please.....

You wouldn't want to be a grinch and deny everyone the hot sex!!

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by Anonymous11/22/04

Needs Editing

Take this as constructive feedback and get your work edited before you submit it. The changes in tense and the typing errors didn't do you any favors.

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by cookiejar11/23/04

U4ea...

I saw your post on the AH and took it into consideration on the tense changes. A hot little tale by the way. Good luck!

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by Rumple Foreskin12/06/04

Hot steaming online sex

That was a fun read. Too bad about the tense screw-up. It'll probably cost you a few votes but the story is still a good one.

Rumple

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