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by Reltne11/21/04

A Fine Read

You are becoming more enjoyable with every poem. Your words and images are good, but you still need to improve your structual organization in order to make the reading more enjoyable. - Keep writing, you are worth reading!

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by LilDarlin11/27/04

Good One here~

I enjoyed the tale of your youth. What a wild ride. Bawdy an all. *Grins*.. ~

I drank of the leggiest years,
and feasted on greenest of plants.
drank all the dregs,
then devoured the roots.~

What imagery ..Great~!!....More Please~!!

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by LeBroz02/11/07

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A bit over wordy but told a tale well of a dissolute life.

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