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your poem
is mentioned on the new poems review thread. :)
I so like to see a needy man...
this poem is great! You conveyed the situation so well that it makes me yearn to be two (h)ours away from, well, um, a man who is needy for me.
......
to ours
together
two
ours-I like how you ended this. Pretty neat. Felt the NEED! Man oh man! Made me want more!
The desire ...
... is palpable! ~Imp
Very nice
I think I already commented on the boards, tt2u; I love the clever word play and tick tock clock of your lust. Well done!
witty tung~
love the twist and focus on the time broken down cute~
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Very nice work tt2u. This metaphor is something I know myself and your poem flows seamlessly. Fab!
Loved the use ...
great poem and wonder work on the short and long building of the stanzas.. falling back and forth longing and patience.. good stuff
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