by SluttyBisexualGuy
mmmmmmmmmmm can't wait!!!!!!!! That should tell you how great this is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i Hope Cassie messes up another city document. Would love for her to be punished by worshiping Sara Chales’ legs and pussy while daddy watches.
This is turning into a really great story. Just please DON'T add the mom into the mix. As soon as another person is introduced into it, I lose all interest. I like these kinds of stories for the D/d aspect, not a 3 some. Maybe mom finds out what they are doing and doesn't like it and leaves. Then Cassie stays home to go to college and continues working for her dad. Looking forward to the next chapter (I hope). 5 stars!
I’m enjoying this story but please learn the difference between tights and stockings. The words are not interchangeable.
This is a very sexy story. But it’s your over the top metaphors that had me laughing out loud. Some weak authors use hyperbolic metaphors to their detriment, but your sardonic voice is clear and hilarious.
Let’s see the next installment soon.
very nice...a few too many metaphors..but a very nice compliment to the first chapter.......dont wait so long between stories and dont disappoint but not following up with the next chapter....
The story is so fucking hot I came like 6 times reading it I can't wait to read the next part about your daughter fucking you at the office behind your wife back please don't include your wife I want to read all about you pleasing your daughter teaching her a lesson for her naughty dirty ways please post if another portion of this since I can keep coming to your work
I am waiting for part 3 eagerly.
Aslo that Orions undone Belt and Ursa no longer Minor had me laugh out loud.
I really need you to do a few more chapters of this story. It’s great just enough on the edge. I’m waiting to see if it extends outside of the office.
I/we really need parts 3 & 4. Part 4 can have the Sara receive some discipline.
Don’t leave us hanging! This story has been absolutely electric so far, please give us a worthy and satisfying ending!
U made me all wet ...
and i like the way you write :) humor is nice and rythm is pleasent. PLEASE write some more of this one (9_9)
Uggg I read both of the stories of this hoping that it would find a decent conclusion at least and instead am struck with a to be continued.......please do not pull a *'Devil is a part timer'* on us....(*Sorry for the anime reference)
As a past writer myself, I understand having other obligations in the real world. Would love to see the final chapter when you have a chance. Thanks again for the great writings you've provided over the years.
Wolverine7009
All these goofy and cliched references are tiresome. Now, I'll sit back and wait for the comments that anonymous comments amount to nothing.
So far as it goes this is a great story, " To be continued" is definitely not the ending I was looking for from this exciting tale. Is Cassie to receive further punishment or is Sara going to hear Cassie under the desk and call her out leaving Daddy with two to punish.
Please put our minds to rest and continue with the third chapter.
Great story so far. I love the spanking scenes. Please continue the story, at least 1 last chapter. ✌
Wow!!! really great story. strong build up. please continue, you're a talented writer.
Love this story, & as it was written 4 years ago, obviously there will be no part 3 to be continued
Having said that, I can see that Cassie will again purposefully make a mistake on another file & Daddy will point out to Sarah, that it was indeed Cassie fault. This will lead to Sarah giving Cassie a spanking in front of Daddy. Maybe even leading to Cassie being forced to eat Sarahs pussy & enjoying it like a slut, getting it ready for Daddy's cock. Wish my daughtrrs were like this
What a pity, the story had started to crescendo but failed to reach the climax.
Loved the series though it is a shame there isn't any more. Maybe in the future.
It would've been good, but the metaphors dripped like poo rain on a cold summer's day, distracting the reader like grandpa coming in during a masturbation session. The constant interruptions broke the mood like a police raid at a brothel. Was it supposed to be funny? It was about as funny as running a cheese grater over your bare ass. It was as excessive as a portaloo at the end of a weekend music festival.