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thank you
tungtied, I had forgotten all about that poem, must say you brought me to tears this morning literally, I love the lines inbetween, I am learning how personal poetry is with this exercize, I knew it but didn't know until I found myself sinking into other peoples cores and like this poem, feeling connected so intimately with someone I really do not know, I do, but I don't. Words. Thank you
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Damn. This is good. Written with such great truths here, friend.
Feeling~~
to achieve the extraordinary
escape from triviality is essential
with apprehensive anticipation~
What feeling you put in every word..line..every breath.
So much depth here. One can just sense it as it flows through and takes control. Not letting you go till the last lil word has been whispered, echoing throughout.Wonderful poem.
More Please~~!!
escape into bliss?
very deep poem~
had to read it a couple times
to get where you were going with this?
very witty and thought out...
witty words from the tung~
another good read
thanks :)
Wow.
Tung, this is one of the most empowering poems I have ever read. I have put this into my favorites. This is a poem that could be put on a poster with a person climbing a mountain or one of those kinds of inspirational posters (you know what I mean). It was, to me, that dayum good. It read like a mental call to arms. Excellent. Absoulutely excellent.
Crap
Just plain crap
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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