The author writes like a foreign exchange student just learning the English language. Syntax is bad, wording is bad, tenses are mixed in the sentence and singular vs plural are mixed in the sentences. The ending really is a downer.
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Anonymous04/10/07
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The writer's spelling, and mix up of gender within the story was horrible. The characters were in one position and then as it went on it was as if the writer forgot they had the characters in that position and they were said to be in another position. This story was just out all over the place and not well written. It was so horrible, I can't even explain it.
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English anyone?
The author writes like a foreign exchange student just learning the English language. Syntax is bad, wording is bad, tenses are mixed in the sentence and singular vs plural are mixed in the sentences. The ending really is a downer.
Learn to write
The writer's spelling, and mix up of gender within the story was horrible. The characters were in one position and then as it went on it was as if the writer forgot they had the characters in that position and they were said to be in another position. This story was just out all over the place and not well written. It was so horrible, I can't even explain it.
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