All Comments on 'Veronica'

Definitely want more of this story. Been looking for something like this for quite a while

This was very good. Please say your continuing with part 2

Great intro for beginners in this lifestyle. I look forward to the continuation. That was quite well written.

Looking forward to reading the rest.

A real good start. Hope we dont have to wait to long for the ocntinuatuin

Thankyou for the comments, I'm glad people like this, even if it is a bit slow getting to the dirty. There will be a second chapter, and hopefully it won't take too long :D

Hey BabyBat,

Wonderful first post. The story is engaging & I love the reading eroticism. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Looking forward to the next part. Keep up the good writing.

don't stop, I so want to see where this goes, very erotic

Mad respect from a fellow Bioshock fan. Absolutely loved Infinite. Cool story too, being the first one and all. Good luck in your future writings baby bat

: )