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oh god for some reason I need to go to the gym and then buy some alpha hydroxy something or another...
Great choice of lines!!! potent poem
wow
what a line you chose when you picked the vagina one. lol But you did a great job with it! :)
Wow~
Good grief what a way to start a poem. I loved it. The whole poem is err well a lil distubing (in reference to it being your mom).. but I still loved it. I loved your imagery and it flowed great. You made the *borrowed* lines seamless.. More Please~~!!
Honest
Just raw fucking honesty. Feelings most of us have but few will admit let alone confront. And well written to boot.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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