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What a great poem! Love it!

I like your turn on this topic and enjoyed the metaphor ;)

This is great, Spike! Love it, and really love that last line! *wink Thanks!

excellent poem...

liked the base ball game play~ <smile>

excellent poem...

liked the base ball game play~ <smile>

nice turn on pop culture and a pleasure for an old ballplayer to read...

Wow.. What a game.. Loved your play..<grins>

Wonderfully playfull imagery.Cute an sssy.

Thank you for the fun with your word play.(laughs)

I really loved this one, it was funny an sweet.

Have to say, this is a poem ya have to read again its that cute and funny.

mechanical sex out of habit

recreation in an hourglass

You simply have to love those lines. :)

Okay - if popping the pill's the way for you,

what must be, must be;

I just find that the slower rise,

makes the crescendo all the more delicious

while we're finishing the symphony together

Once again you captured the moment (moments) perfectly!

Wonderful!

jg

Loved it, funny and fun and ...

with wit and a splash of brilliance all combined to make a terrific poem...thanks.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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