- All
Comments (13) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Great!
What a great poem! Love it!
*
I like your turn on this topic and enjoyed the metaphor ;)
!
This is great, Spike! Love it, and really love that last line! *wink Thanks!
cute and witty
excellent poem...
liked the base ball game play~
cute and witty
excellent poem...
liked the base ball game play~
I take batting practice...
nice turn on pop culture and a pleasure for an old ballplayer to read...
*Fans Self*
Wow.. What a game.. Loved your play..
Wonderfully playfull imagery.Cute an sssy.
Thank you for the fun with your word play.(laughs)
I really loved this one, it was funny an sweet.
Have to say, this is a poem ya have to read again its that cute and funny.
:)
mechanical sex out of habit
recreation in an hourglass
You simply have to love those lines. :)
Cialis? Viagra? Well, if you say so...............
Okay - if popping the pill's the way for you,
what must be, must be;
I just find that the slower rise,
makes the crescendo all the more delicious
while we're finishing the symphony together
ya gotta do what ya gotta do!
Once again you captured the moment (moments) perfectly!
Wonderful!
jg
`
Loved it, funny and fun and ...
This is done...
with wit and a splash of brilliance all combined to make a terrific poem...thanks.
~~
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
----------
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Cialis 3 Viagra 1 or
More submissions by sandspike.