All Comments on 'Esmeralda's Pet'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Quite short

Err... Not sure this story is in the right category. Fantasy or Bdsm were more likely. This is a very short hot bdsm story thought.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Write More

Well written with an interesting plot which could be expanded upon. Please do write more and explore their relationship over time.

fitntrimfitntrimalmost 6 years ago
very hot and deliscious

I love this story! It's delicious that they are in love while being totally owner and slave; their love is nourished even more because the pretty slave is thoroughly disciplined without mercy. PLEASE continue!

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