A Day at the Seaside

Come on back

All of your stories are excellent. It is about time now for you to come out of retirement and give us some more of your works.

excellent

The storie is excellent.

Quite good

Well done. You write well!

Well written

Definitely not my cup of tea, but quite nicely paced for a quicky. Somewhat erotic. I'd kill the bitch though if it ever happened in real life.

Excellent erotica from

an old school favorite author. I apologise as a 'yank' for the unnecessary comments.

Well worth the 100% I'm giving you.

I really think you write well. It's so encouraging to see a favourite author of mine get the same comments from the 'yank puritans' that hide behind anonymity, as I have. Their whole interest in life is to rubbish something that they couldn't write themselves. Glory in the fact that you have ruffled their halo's.
Regards
Rob

Great story!

Memorable story that I keep returning to. I love the contrast between the quiet, matter-of-fact way she begins the story and the complete wantoness of her later behavior followed by a return to her regular, every day behavior. Also like the odd details that make it stand out, the vandyke beard, the fact that he is an older German man who speaks english awkwardly. As for the predictable response of the Loving Wives flamers, they clearly have no understanding of the meaning of the words fiction or fantasy.

One of my favorites

Love a well written story that has the essential element of "truth' even if is is not. It is a plausible scenario.

It's all been said already.

Quietly effective and oddly credible. I usually scan straightforward sexual descriptions -- they do get repetitious -- and look instead for their effects and consequences. In this case, her quiet confession was compelling, every word as justified as she felt.

I'd think hubby was overwhelmed -- nothing left for him to say. One of the best infidelity accounts ever! Congratulations!

wife is a cheating fucking whore - take her back to the hotel and push her off the roof.

Once again I have to disagree

with the comments that referred to it as 'plausible.' I'm afraid I found it to be anything but that. Perhaps if there was a little more background offered about the wife's character? I don't know - but the writing and telling of it was pretty good.

Damn

I hate fucking cheaters. All should suffer in pain.

poor

another wimp husband who likes sloppy seconds

So Arousing

Erotic and sensual as hell. Well-written too.

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