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Turns me on
I´m longing for the next part to be written. It´s a mild story without pain and cruel sadism. I like it because there is an edge that can be real. Keep on writing I´m checking this site everyday. WATT
Handy Guy
Loved the build up, the anticipation... The idea is hot, the description is mouthwatering... Tasteful, erotic, very juicy. Can't wait for more...
RE: Awesome Story Cant Wait for more
Great Story. Really like the idea on the machine. Looking forward to more
MORE more pleaseee
you need to make a second ome whoot that was .. great please write another one i loved this one please and thank youuuu -lj
Call me slow but..
I couldn't follow the images of the machine you built. I was looking forward to more details in the next story but......
"To be continued"
Please, please proof read your next submission. It is very distracting to be reading a good story and come up against poor grammar.
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