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Build It And She Will Come

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/27/04

Turns me on

I´m longing for the next part to be written. It´s a mild story without pain and cruel sadism. I like it because there is an edge that can be real. Keep on writing I´m checking this site everyday. WATT

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by Anonymous11/27/04

Handy Guy

Loved the build up, the anticipation... The idea is hot, the description is mouthwatering... Tasteful, erotic, very juicy. Can't wait for more...

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by Anonymous11/30/04

RE: Awesome Story Cant Wait for more

Great Story. Really like the idea on the machine. Looking forward to more

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by Anonymous11/28/08

MORE more pleaseee

you need to make a second ome whoot that was .. great please write another one i loved this one please and thank youuuu -lj

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by Anonymous08/18/12

Call me slow but..

I couldn't follow the images of the machine you built. I was looking forward to more details in the next story but......

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by Anonymous04/02/14

"To be continued"

Please, please proof read your next submission. It is very distracting to be reading a good story and come up against poor grammar.

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