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This is the "Wild West" that went behind them thar closed doors up in the second floors of saloons, wasn't it? ;)
What goes on, behind closed doors*~
inviting smile in leather and cleavage
boot click smiles across the floor~
Ooohhh great lines here. Your imagery has a smile of its own. I loved the theme and subject matter.
Ya takin us on a trip, behind closed doors.
The whole *feel* of the poem is swaggeringly sassy~~!!
Going to read the next one~!!
OK Art...
you've got my attention..on to part 2.
Wonderful... enticing..
Art just wonderful.. slowly draws one into the visual aspects of the scene..my favorite was..
Quote:
sheets prarie ridden
passion soothing soul
the other coin jingled grin
the warm wind blow
Nice...hmmm... I was there for a split second... on to more..
Du Lac
quite extraordinary...
and I liked the stanza about the tumbleweeds...good imagery! It might have read more smoothly if the "Little creek" line was a bit longer, to balance the rhythm!
your images have vibrant life to them
Art,
I love your work. I am an new poet on this site
and you were kind enough to comment on one of my pieces.
I think you mispelled "prairie" though.
I would invite you to see some of my recent postings.
Carol Anne
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