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Spectacular endeavor
I love the way you are always reaching. You don't stay in the same mood of poetry. You express so many sides of this beautiful way to convey everyday events.
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Very descriptive... showing and telling. Your prose has followed you to poetry. Nice work!
~Wowzzaa~!!
scratchy chin laps
biting growl of a dog
like swimming in a muddy bog
clamy, Lady Laura, water logged~
Wowzza..What a hot lil scene..
Loved this one too.
You just know this was a great time had by all.
I loved the flow, it was steamy and sexy.
Keep'm comin'~~!!
Loving the feeling
these poems possess Art...you're really setting a mood.
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Art..
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scratchy chin laps
biting growl of a dog
like swimming in a muddy bog
clamy, Lady Laura, water logged
HOT! Wow... question for you.. the rhyming is not consistant but flows so well...is this bending the rules? If it is bend babe.. bend..for it works well here!
Du Lac
"Marisma dust of a trail steed"
telling line from a great series! Keep going!
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