All Comments on 'Sweet Ebony Ch. 02'

why so long to write this disjointed drivel.....

The first chapter had some humor, this doesn't. I felt the characters in the first chapter were somewhat real - here not. The first chapter was in past tense, here present. I assume Javagirl was just having a bad day and look forward to some good stuff!

where are your submissions?

If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all!

Leave Javagirl alone!

If my students had not bothered to turn the page and see the second chapter...I'd have given them detentions..lol..

I have a white friend, i am Black, and I would love to have this happen between us.

Incredible story loved both parts