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by JasperMan

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
once upon a poem!

poems are words created to express an emotion or poetic moment with various Literary Art~

I recommend two things...

(1)shorter poem

and less repetition...

emotions are cool

view points are our own...

...our Art is shared~

great ryhme and very thought out (~_*)

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