All Comments on 'Christmas Vacation'

Is this your 4th contest entry? Be careful not to write one long sentence....in some places, 3-4 shorter sentences would be so much easier to read. Also, at the end, "news year" I assume was written quickly for "New Years" . Good luck, as always!

Don't quit your day job.

Well taken advice, considering my window cleaning company makes me in one day what you wish you could make in a week.

Happy Thanksgiving Turkey! err I mean Baby! :)

I'd love to see you write better. But then again, I have no idea who you are do I? So even if you wrote a story I couldn't check it out. Classy move with that insult.

Btw, since I should leave a comment on the story. I liked it. You should keep both your day job and writing because I wouldn't want to see you poor and having to sell your computer. ;)

Some may not think it is funny, or even like the story. I loved it and remember it well :) the story EW LOL

I think that might be a nice place to visit.

Loved it

Loved it! I'm a 40 year old married redheaded white wife, extremely orally inclined, deliciously BI, experienced only one gang bang (all BLACK), which I truly loved. I do love SEX! I'm 5'9", 38DD (honestly), 32-36, long firm legs, firm ads too.

I love leaving my warm red lip prints all over a lover.

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