Is this your 4th contest entry? Be careful not to write one long sentence....in some places, 3-4 shorter sentences would be so much easier to read. Also, at the end, "news year" I assume was written quickly for "New Years" . Good luck, as always!
I'd love to see you write better. But then again, I have no idea who you are do I? So even if you wrote a story I couldn't check it out. Classy move with that insult.
Btw, since I should leave a comment on the story. I liked it. You should keep both your day job and writing because I wouldn't want to see you poor and having to sell your computer. ;)
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You are certainly prolific....
Is this your 4th contest entry? Be careful not to write one long sentence....in some places, 3-4 shorter sentences would be so much easier to read. Also, at the end, "news year" I assume was written quickly for "New Years" . Good luck, as always!
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Don't quit your day job.
To don't quit your day job
Well taken advice, considering my window cleaning company makes me in one day what you wish you could make in a week.
Happy Thanksgiving Turkey! err I mean Baby! :)
It takes balls to insult somebody anonymously
I'd love to see you write better. But then again, I have no idea who you are do I? So even if you wrote a story I couldn't check it out. Classy move with that insult.
Btw, since I should leave a comment on the story. I liked it. You should keep both your day job and writing because I wouldn't want to see you poor and having to sell your computer. ;)
LOL
Some may not think it is funny, or even like the story. I loved it and remember it well :) the story EW LOL
wonderful
I think that might be a nice place to visit.
Wonderful
Loved it
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