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SHOCK~~!!
Ohhh I can not believe you did it. Wow what a shcoker. Loved your ending to this series..Just so shocked and a lil sad..(Did I say that outloud?)
Such a bold, sassy, sexy lady..gone..
Yes I do have to admit, this was a GREAT ending.
Loved the *tears* and the *rose upon the stone*..
Just exceptional Art..~~!!
Bravo...
Bravo Art...
loved it.. and no pussy footing around.. Romantic reality... lifes unjust truths.. I loved it..
Du Lac
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"Sympothy" ? Get real. This is trash, not poetry.
my trash is...
...getting better don't ya think?
well thanks for the vote of confidence mr/mrs edit~
I got the idea from reading some of the early poets
and their ballads and sequel tales or realization.
I know I need more practice so more to come!
thanks to all that took the time to comment, too (~_*)
Art~
To the Insignificant worm hole. Yes you USA
The mere fact you could even come out with such drivel only makes you more pathetic in life. We in America we are a proud people we stand up for what we say. We are proud enough to come forward and come toe to toe with another.
You worm without a scintilla of inteligence go back into your hole. If you forgot where your home is its down with the rest of the dirt. Under Art's feet.
I apologize Art I had to get something off my chest first.
Beautiful story from word one.. sniffle sniffle..
new poems review mention
for saturday 27 2004
thanks for the reads and comments...
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