if its there to be taken dont hang back,go for it and enjoy
Very hot! But a bit more finesse and a bit less 'wham bam' would have been better. Lukas
I vote for more "wham Bam"- you're good at it; inetersting to read it from a womans point of view
Very very hot. I like these types of stories. Quick and to the point.
I agree with more "Wham bam". Quick and to the point, but still with a nice story, and great character development. Loved it.
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way to go
if its there to be taken dont hang back,go for it and enjoy
4 Sis
Very hot! But a bit more finesse and a bit less 'wham bam' would have been better.
Lukas
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I vote for more "wham Bam"- you're good at it; inetersting to read it from a womans point of view
Hot
Very very hot. I like these types of stories. Quick and to the point.
Moar damn it
I agree with more "Wham bam". Quick and to the point, but still with a nice story, and great character development. Loved it.
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