From all that I've read over the years, I think this was probably the worst I've ever read!
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Anonymous11/28/04
critics
Ive been playing music for thirty years. if there is anything I have learned it"s always take comments or advice with a grain of salt. Be it good or bad.....Do what you do for yourself and the hell what ever body else thinks.
Your story lacks depth, sure there is a basic idea of what the mother did to her son at first when she thought he was wearing her stuff, but by the end of the story, there didn't even seem to be any reason why she did that in the first place, nevermind the reason why she sucked him off, or even fucked him.
By the way, ever notice how those who are quick to criticize, never bother to identify themselves?
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Anonymous11/28/04
Would love to see more
This is a great story. Would love to see this go farther. Bring back the teacher for a little 3way play. Maybe even add the mom taking her son's ass as well.
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Anonymous11/28/04
fuck em
for they know nothing about a hott story and this is one........keep up the good work and write more often
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Anonymous11/29/04
payback's a beyotch!
great story so far. but he needs to get even with the teacher for fucking him in the ass. looks like the mom is all for some family love. hey, maybe make the teacher wear the panties and stockins next time. more please.
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Anonymous11/29/04
Agrees
I whole heartily agree with Paybacks a Beyotch. Pay back the neighbor and mom for "jumping the gun". Make the neighbor your bitch.
I loved your story I just wish there was MORE! mORE DRESSUPS, MORE "MOM'S FRIENDS", some discipline, spankings, maid serve.
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Anonymous08/04/10
omg nice
Thats a really nice story. sniffing and licking moms panties is wonderful. but fuck her! man that would be so good.
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Anonymous11/11/10
hot story, but
the only thing I was the son being forcefuly fucked by another man.
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Anonymous07/02/15
Hot
good work! you captured my two biggest fantasies; getting fucked by a big dick and fucking my mum
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Anonymous02/18/16
sniffing mums dirty panties
When I was aged 13 to 16 I used to steal my mum's dirty panties to sniff and fantasise that she caught me.she never did. Her sweet sweaty shitty aroma drove me wild. Especially the ones covered with my dad's spunk, I fantasised that she forced me to suck his spunk out.and lots of other things to PUNISH me.By doing to me all the things I found most abhorrent and disgusting.i remember once I had her white cotton panties over my head sucking my dad's spunk out of her gusset and fantasising how she made me get on all fours and take my dad's cock up my ass then suck my shit off it
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Anonymous12/02/16
Panties
Never touched moms, but her younger sisters were lovely
English
Give Up
From all that I've read over the years, I think this was probably the worst I've ever read!
critics
Ive been playing music for thirty years. if there is anything I have learned it"s always take comments or advice with a grain of salt. Be it good or bad.....Do what you do for yourself and the hell what ever body else thinks.
Needs Improvement
Your story lacks depth, sure there is a basic idea of what the mother did to her son at first when she thought he was wearing her stuff, but by the end of the story, there didn't even seem to be any reason why she did that in the first place, nevermind the reason why she sucked him off, or even fucked him.
By the way, ever notice how those who are quick to criticize, never bother to identify themselves?
Would love to see more
This is a great story. Would love to see this go farther. Bring back the teacher for a little 3way play. Maybe even add the mom taking her son's ass as well.
fuck em
for they know nothing about a hott story and this is one........keep up the good work and write more often
payback's a beyotch!
great story so far. but he needs to get even with the teacher for fucking him in the ass. looks like the mom is all for some family love. hey, maybe make the teacher wear the panties and stockins next time. more please.
Agrees
I whole heartily agree with Paybacks a Beyotch. Pay back the neighbor and mom for "jumping the gun". Make the neighbor your bitch.
GREAT
I loved your story I just wish there was MORE! mORE DRESSUPS, MORE "MOM'S FRIENDS", some discipline, spankings, maid serve.
omg nice
Thats a really nice story. sniffing and licking moms panties is wonderful. but fuck her! man that would be so good.
hot story, but
the only thing I was the son being forcefuly fucked by another man.
Hot
good work! you captured my two biggest fantasies; getting fucked by a big dick and fucking my mum
sniffing mums dirty panties
When I was aged 13 to 16 I used to steal my mum's dirty panties to sniff and fantasise that she caught me.she never did. Her sweet sweaty shitty aroma drove me wild. Especially the ones covered with my dad's spunk, I fantasised that she forced me to suck his spunk out.and lots of other things to PUNISH me.By doing to me all the things I found most abhorrent and disgusting.i remember once I had her white cotton panties over my head sucking my dad's spunk out of her gusset and fantasising how she made me get on all fours and take my dad's cock up my ass then suck my shit off it
Panties
Never touched moms, but her younger sisters were lovely
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