Becoming His Girl

me please

wish it wase being seduced

Loved younger/older

Hot story! Loved the ending. Hope there's more coming.

Loved It!

Loved the story. I would love to have a piece of Billy's man-pussy. This story got me hard. Keep 'em cumming!

Very Hott

Great story loved it.

if dreams could come true

a wonderful story.......wish i was billy......please keep writing
kelly in texas

jealous

Oh my god! I haven't cum so much in months. Don't stop writing.

hot story

This was really hot--I love feminizing stories and young guys getting fucked hard like that. Maybe you could have him gradually becoming more feminine in a sequel?

FIRE

As a married, straight man I clicked on this one by accident and well the tent in my pants tells me it was a good story.

WOW!

What a great story! It deserves a sequel. Like, maybe Billy going to college in the Jim's city and becoming his full time slut/girlfriend?

Keep writing~you have a way with words!

Damned good story

As a married man I couldn't help but get hard from that one! You did good! Keep it up! (sic)

Mmm very hot

It made my little cock sooo hard, and made me ache to be taken by a bigger stronger guy.

This story is SO hot

This story is SO hot. I wish an older man would seduce me like that. We NEED a sequel!

More Please

Wow, that is some hot story--great plot line and visuals to die for. I must echo everyone above, WE NEED MORE ON THIS STORY. The feminizing was just too too hot. God, I hope that they go public in the next one. Loved that he called him WENDY, perfect. More please, MUCH MUCH MORE.

made me hard

Great story I wish it was me

Sooooo HOT!!

I loved the seduction of the younger boy by the older experienced man. I was once that young boy and my older man made me feel things I'd never felt before and made me do things I'd never done before. I've cum so hard from reading this story and reliving my experience. Please give us all a sequel. And thank you for sharing this 1st time with the rest of us.

Wow!

Hot, soooo hot.
Really got the juices flowing ;) Love the older/younger male stories. Can't wait to read more!

Holy Shit

I couldn't believe how hot your story is. You really get into the mind of a bottom so well. My Boyfriend and I play the exact same roles. I can't wait to show him this one. I need some more.

Oh my God

That story was so hot. I loved reading how Jim taunted him by calling him Wendy and asking him if he felt her lover was making her cum harder than he ever did. My wife has often told me that her boyfriends before we got married made her cum better than I did and I've always imagined being taken by one of them and feeling it for myself. I wish I had or had met a Jim to show my how it felt to really be fucked. Please write more.

First step in recovery....is admitting

You might not fuck(women) like a man. But u r one hell of a Fuck with a man......Go figure....

Big cock feel

There is nothing like that big cock feel if you only have a little dick like me. Loved the sensasional descriptions. The sense of reality and the emotions were beautifully expressed. The feminine side of the boy with the smooth like dick reminds me of why I shave my little dick. There is nothing better than feeling that lovely large pulsing cock. More please.

HOT Do me next

I had my finger buried in my ass as I was reading this. When jim shot his load so did I without even touching my cock but all I could do was dream of his big hot cock being remmed up my tender ass. I would love to have a threesome with him and another guy. The two of us could be on our hands and knees and Jim could take turns with each of our asses. The winner would be whichever of us made him come in our ass.

Would love to be his girl

ummm....such a hot story is a rarity in here...damn u have made me soo hot..how i wish that some hot older stud picks me up & makes me dress up like a girl for him...i'd wear the sexiest lingerie.heels & dresses for him to make him hot enough to just lift me up & throw me on the bed & start fuckign em like a whore..& i don't care what he calls me..& if my gf watches me while he is fuckign damn, it would be soo hottt

Either you're using two different names ....

...or one of you is going to be really annoyed.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpa ge.php?uid=634759&page=submissions

It's a hot story. I wonder which one of you actually
wrote it.

stockings and garters

great story, it would be so hot to play the fem role in this story! ultimate fantasy role playing for me!

Awesome Story

Very nice. I would love to be "taken" in such a way.

How can you not love "Wendy"!

"Wendy" is what many of us once were..... sexy, smooth, so willing to please a guy like a girl! Nice sexy, well written story!

Wow!

My little cock exploded all over my fire engine red panties.Great story.

me too need my man

I wish if I could have a similar experience. Nice.

fucking hot!

Transfomed

I want to be Wendy. Please take me!

Awesome

I`d LOVE to be Wendy and have a good HARD fuck throwed to my tight lil ass!! And feel the hot cum shoot deep inside me! Of course I`d have to suck his cock clean of the cum & my butt juice!! Squat down and squeeze the cum from my well fucked hole into my hand so I could savor the cum too!!

Great Read!

Amazing story! Great story line and I love the stolen panties!

Faaaantastic story, looove the ending

I can imagine his slender body all oiled, then the bedroom scene, wow. However, the moms panties in the last scene got me hard(er), mmmm

di

like him ,i was also relief

I was seduced, no other words for it, he knew what he was doing, and he did it well, me a dumb 15 year old dummy, yea I know , but for over a year he made me his woman, I miss him to this day, never did it since, why spoil a good memorey?

I wish I was Wendy

I've had a similar experience. I met an older man who treated me like his girlfriend -- and I loved it !!! I sucked his cock, licked his ass, and then he fucked me hard while he kissed me -- I became his regular lover. Just like at the end of your story, I started wearing panties, and then nylons, and then short skirts and lacy bras. Now, I really look like his girlfriend when he fucks me -- AND I LOVE IT !!!!
Can't wait to read the next part of your story.

Sounds like you bitches need it rough.

need it rough

yeah daddy - need a man to squeeze my nips and tuck that hole like a bitch for you - open me wide

u had me shooting cum all over

What a story!!!

Just brilliant. Got me hot and horny. Will fantasise about this all day.

Horny as fuck!

Gr8 story man, love the humiliation of the lad!

Love the Humilation

I must agree with a previous comment. I just love reading humiliation stories. They put a smile on my face, make my heart pound, and wish he was pounding into me *sighs*

GOOD EXP

I was also fucked by a man .Now I 'm his keep.Daily he fuck me .His wife also knows about this things

that way

i love being fucked that way. kissing and receiving his cock. love the story!

Spent a weekend in a motel room with an older man. Did what I was told to do. loved it all, including the taste of load after load. My butt still tingles when I fanatize about it.

mmmmmmmmm.? i will keep my thoughts to myself.? consider my silence as charity for this attempt at story writing.?

I would love it

I am a 63 year old man and I woould love to have a man make sweet love to me. Maybe someday my fantasy will come true

A GIRL

he becums a girl and gets a nice hard reward

Great story

I would love to feel a cock in my tight ass. Even better would be sucking a cock while another guy is fucking my ass... Ah! Fantasies if only they came true

I've been kissed a couple times and yess it is so nice, like the first time you kiss a girl but better because you now feel like a shy girl. And to touch anothers cock and feel how it fels so velvety yet hard. I especialy like the feel of cum running from me and dripping down my ass cheecks. I also love it when the cum turns cool and becomes extra runny, scooping some up to tast ans smearing more on my face and lips to smell it as it dries.

wow

I think men can sence it when you are young and horny. real scary for me the first time