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All Comments on 'Fall of The Femme Fatales Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Just what I was hoping for!

The Asian heroine falls, a redhead next. Will heroine # 4 be black? Can't wait to find out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Holy mind control, Batman!

Great writing. Very original. Part of me is rooting for the bad guy and part of me hopes one of the heroes will break the spell. We shall see.

spankingfunforspankingfunforabout 12 years ago
Jade is Ambers success at making her a slave for her Master!

Jade is super woman that Amber used her super powers to turn into a woman slave for their Master..Ambers pussy is the next thing to her Masters cock!

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