All Comments on 'A Family Reunion'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
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i see why no comments yet, no real background way to rushed and no end it all equals a half assed story. glad you stopped writing.

EmberlaEmberlaalmost 3 years ago

You might want to double check your spelling, not a lot of errors but enough to hitch the flow of reading. The choice of having them strip before finding a location is a little strange. I know it is tempting to write about cum shots that are copious, but it can cross into excessive really quickly. Better than a lot of other things on here though.

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Hello. I am 48 years old, 6'5" tall, 325ish pounds, with hazel brown eyes and bald (by choice), Dominant & Polyamours. I have given much thought as how to best write stories here, and the best thing I can come up with is to be myself. I know that what I write isn't goin...