All Comments on 'Uncle Vern Plays With Me'

by Sassylaidee53

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great start

I look forward to reading what happens on future Friday nights.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow1

SOME MORE! SOME MORE! I LOVE HOW IT GOES SO SLOW AND GETS MORE AND MORE INTENSE FROM SO SEEMINGLY INNOCENT TO SO VERY HOT! I WISH I HAD AN UNCLE LIKE THAT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very Nice

Very well written using a slow build-up as his needs begin to grow as does her arousal. I don't know if this story is based on actual events but I would love to read more from you. The way he has her sitting on his lap, the way he speaks to her, and his gentle yet firm control are very similiar to how I would have been with my babygirl. Bittersweet memories for me but at least I can live vicariously through him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Some play

Now then, Sassy, you gotta let us know more...

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Got Me Going

I definately enjoyed the story, and I think like everyone else Im waiting for next weekend!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
So HOT!

Keep them coming! Excellent!!!!

mark_p_nzmark_p_nzover 19 years ago
MORE

more more more keep it cumming

Wo0odWo0odover 19 years ago
great dirty old man hot young gal story

Good job, good writing style, the plot isn't particularly my thing, but what the heck, its an erotic story and a damn good one at that.

SweetieBBWSweetieBBWover 19 years ago
WONDERFUL!!!

I like the thought of being bribed into letting a hot uncle have his way with me...YUMMY

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
PLEASE WRITE MORE

Wonderful story, I pray there are more, cant wait to see what happens next Friday.

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 19 years ago
I like the way he tricks her into it slowly.....

....very subtle approach. It's more realistic to use either assertiveness or subtlity to seduce a relative instead of lust and proposition by themselves. They might very well refuse, due to the social taboos and stigma involved.

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 19 years ago
I like the way he tricks her into it slowly.....

....very subtle approach. It's more realistic to use either assertiveness or subtlity to seduce a relative instead of lust and proposition by themselves. They might very well refuse, due to the social taboos and stigma involved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Got me hot

It was a well written story. It was fluid and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wow...

Very hot. Well written too. Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
YESS!!

My pussy got so wet while i read this. man i hope you continue to write more stories. id love for my uncle to play with me like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Delicious!!!

i love authoritative uncles who want to play with their nieces....my favorite fantasy!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mmmmmmmm

Loved it, would love an uncle to lick my puss and suck my tits!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A real clit throbber

This is one of the most delicious stories I've ever read. I adored how the uncle worked his magic with the young girl, taking so much time to savor her body and let her pleasure build. He loved her and her body and was so terrific at making her body feel good, especially her nipples and clit. What girl reading this wouldn't wish for such an uncle? I squirmed so much that my clit exploded! It was the best cum I ever had without being touched.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Awesome

Everyone niece should have an Uncle Vern!!! Awesome story. Want another Friday night story with Uncle Vern.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very very hot

this is such an awesome story - well written. SO hot!

Pandoras DesirePandoras Desireover 15 years ago
Is there gonna be more?

Loved it! but I was a little disappointed that there wasn't a continuation or something. you need to write more. you have a way with words and kept me interested till the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
WOWZA!

This story is sooo good! You're a very good writer. Please don't stop writing stories. I want to see what happens NEXT Friday night!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fantastic!

OMG I have to tell you how much I LOVE this story! it's amazingly awesome... the way he talks to her like that is soooo hot. You have a talent for writing, I hope you write more stories. Maybe with these two again?

- Kaylie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Oh God!

Oh, God! Uncle should slip his dick into her pussy, too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
That is wonderful

I was stroking my cock all the time I was reading this, and came so hard at the end. More, please. Uncle Vern just has to fuck her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
fuck me

This made my pussy hot. I fingered myself while reading this and my clit was throbbing with ecstacy. I was so wet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Young uncle from b here

32 yr old here hit me up at shags70@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fuck yes

This was really a good story just needs a #2 so that uncle can fuck here cherry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more!

Write more!! This got me sooooooo wet and horny ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
such a clit throbber

I couldn't stop rubbing my clit; it's so swollen invisioning Vern licking her throbber and how hard his cock must be!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
too robotic

not natural enough

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
addicted.

Very good; got me off. Very similar to my own sexual abuse as a child. It was absolutely horrible when it happened, but now I'm addicted to this shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
epic

best story of this century. my dick is hard as a mountaaaain. plz let me be your uncle vern

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

God I read this story at least once daily before I watch porn and wish I had an uncle Vern to make me cum!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Absolutely loved the way the uncle pushed a little bit each time, moving, moving, moving his niece a bit farther giving her explanations each time. Totally believable.

Thank you, Gorgeous Muse

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
rape?

!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Turn-On

This story certainly turned me on.Makes me wish I had let the old man play with me

but I was afraid. I remember how good his hand felt rubbing my little chest and pussy before I ran away.

The only thing ruining this story is that no one at eighteen is that innocent. A much younger age would have made it hotter.

I was seven.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
good

loved it - was approached by my uncle at young age - i said no - but always wondered what could have come of it had I given in and let him touch my nipples - also had another family member that tried to stick a finger inside me when I was asleep - i again freaked out and didnt let it happen - so many times I have started to write a story and wanted to add the things to the story that I now had hoped would or could have happened

foreveradancerforeveradancerabout 6 years ago
long-time fave

I first read this story probably 10 years ago, when I stole the (well-loved) print-out from my older brother's drawer. I don't know how many times since then I've read those pages. This story was a significant part of my youthful sexual awakening, and many years later I can finally thank you! I've read a *lot* of porn since then, some better than others, but this story has held a special place in my heart. Thanks again for writing a story that has been such a part of my life.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

oh yes, uncle vern, suck my titties and finger my pussy then lick and suck my cunt and soon i'll want you to slide your cock in my cunt and fuck me, i want to feel those strokes and your seed being pumped into me ... and i'll have your baby and my titties will get filled with milk and my nipples will be engorged and you can suckle my milk uncle vern ... oh please suck me dry uncle vern ... i'll do anything for a new bikini and you can watch my tummy grow and milk my titties, milk them uncle vern, suck them and suck them some more ... oh, i love your mouth uncle vern, and i want you to suck my titties while you pump your cock in my pussy, and unload your seed into me while milking me, uncle vern

xina2591xina2591about 2 months ago

oh uncle vern, suck those titties, suck them good then suck her clit get her crazy that she wants to suck your cock and have you fuck her and pump your seed into her ... makes her titties grow with fetal development ... yes, uncle vern, pump her full of your seed and let her make a baby for you so you can suckle her milk filled titties all the time and aunt cindy can take care of the baby while she watches you suckle toot's titties and fuck her at the same time ... yessssssssssssssss

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