All Comments on 'A Policewoman's Secret Ch. 01'

As a fan of erotic fiction I have seen from time to time great gems of written work. After reading your two page preface, I hope that you will wow your readers with a lengthy set of chapters which will give a wonderful and descriptive story. I for one have been seeking a tale which involves a very busty female police officer doing great descriptive sexual activities. I hope that she is a redhead, since this form of hair color is very under used when it comes to tales of lust.

A Story where a cop is used rather than being the one that uses and abuses a suspect. Everytime I see a fucking story where some cop stops a car with a married woman in it, and ends up fucking her on the hood of a car, it makes me want to puke. Thumbs up and high fives to ya man.

Not a bad beginning, but a chapter needs to finish. You didn't get to the end of anything; you just rather abruptly stopped. Patience, patience. Don't submit a piece until it is whole.

But where's the rest of it?

as if cops don't have to take drug tests. As if she couldn't just threaten him. Ridiculous